http://stuntriderjenny.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] stuntriderjenny.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised 2012-12-31 10:41 pm (UTC)

This is a beautiful, gorgeous piece of writing! I love reading stories where Clint and Natasha have their own language and non-verbal communication, its one of my favorite types, and then you throw in the rest of the team not picking up on their silent communication, its the best! I had an inkling that Clint was the one that shot her, but didn't think that she told him to! I adored all the flashback/other scenes, I love getting glimpses of what their "dorm style" life would be like! and Taboo, oh yeah those two should not be on the same team ;)

The entire story was wonderful and well written, and I especially adored the banter during the cooking scene, and the ending!!

“But the minute Steve starts lecturing us about our communication skills, my painkillers will kick in and I’ll probably pass out.”

“You’re not taking your painkillers anymore.”

“And that, Agent Barton, will stay between you and me, or else I won’t let you escape under the guise of carrying me to bed.”

and this

“Agreed.” He says, and finally she sees that small, private smile grace his eyes, barely reaching his lips. Most others would miss it, but she never would.

You just needed to know what you were looking for.

love it!! :D

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