ext_47837 ([identity profile] crazy4orcas.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised 2013-08-04 02:23 am (UTC)

Re: Fic: Don't shoot the messengers (Teen and up, no warnings)

Yes, this is adorable!

Tony's POV is an excellent way to tell the story, and packs a punch with lines like It looked domestic, in such an unreal, ordinary way, that it made Tony do a double take. He had an uneasy feeling about it all, and pushed the thoughts of his parent's impeccable, perfectly polished, empty kitchen out of his mind. And about his nannies and their singing to him.

LOVED the discussion about Natasha being badass even out of the catsuit!

I hope to see more with these kids :)

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