I really like the lines like "Clearly there’s something going on behind the scenes. Mystery and intrigue she could handle. Talking about feelings, not so much." Seeing both of them completely deny their feelings and still try to pretend it is all about the mission is fantastic.

The way you described Natasha getting ready made even her actions seem like part of assembling a weapon which fit her totally.

It made me very happy that you kept Clint's hearing problems in there. The little details really make everything better.

The tension at the gun scene was really well done. I got worried that the whole thing was going to end in tragedy and was super pumped that Pepper got a chance to kick ass and take names.
The date was perfect for both of the pairings. Thank you so much! Sorry for the late response, my internet has been wonky!