ext_72272 ([identity profile] workerbee73.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised 2012-08-04 04:12 pm (UTC)

Re: FIC: softly she carries me (rated R for language)

This was simulatneously creepy, touching and, dare I say it, sweet.

That? That right there? Srsly everything I was going for in this section. EVERYTHING. I wanted the fairytale aspect, I wanted his concern to be apparent, but I also wanted it to be somehow unsettling too. This fic shouldn't give you warm fuzzies; if it does, then I haven't done my job.

**bounces up and down**

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