ext_26680 ([identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised on December 15th, 2012 at 11:39 pm
Re: Interesting premise!
Thanks! Comments are always great! :D

I think in context the POV will make more sense because the larger part around it is more obviously from Clint's POV. (But I'll definitely reread the whole bit inline and clarify that, because you're absolutely right that it isn't obvious here.)

Before this scene, Clint and Natasha have already had a very serious (and emotional) discussion about the fact that their lives aren't such that they could keep a baby -- which is to say this version of them doesn't think that they can -- and this version of Natasha in particular doesn't want or know how to handle the emotional side of this development. She's not coping well.

As for how it ends... I'm not sure yet? I have one ending, which my betas have encouraged me to keep, but they're also reminding me that this is fic and I can have my cake and eat it to (as it were) so I may do both endings... ;)
 
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