I love the interactions between Tony and Thor. Many lolz were had, I assure you :D I like how Thor is all excited about Heimdall and Tony's like "REALLY??!?!?! TELL ME MOAR. NAO PLZ". "Planet God" was really funny to me, as well as the bit about being overly dramatic. REALLY TONY, REALLY?! *ahem* I liked that XD Also, while reading this I'm kind of convinced Bruce has a crush on Natasha. Just throwing that out there cause I'm cool like that. But him and Tony just dorking out over how Heimdall travels is like "aww boys being science dorks is awesome :3". I gusta. LOL Shawarma XD I love the lines you throw in here, it's awesome!
The wolf scene (yay I was right) is another wonderful insight into how Clint thinks. I like how you described him surviving and how he was just existing before the wolf and now is actually making an effort to stay around. The shout-out to Coulson ;-; but I do like Amun's name because it's fitting sort of :3 Clint realizing he takes up lost causes is another tugging moment, as well as the fact he's starting to realize that YES he can be saved. Angst is so beautiful! I love this fic, I do. Thank you again! :D
Natasha feeling like she's failed was a wonderful section. I like how she refuses to cry even though many would have caved and cried and done a hell of a lot of it by then, but she hasn't. The fact that she doesn't know how to NOT fail shows how much she needs Clint and the fact she can't find him hurts her physically. I like how she shouts at the tree that Clint found so symbolic and how she just wanted desperately for him to be there and he wasn't. I love the angst and pain that that brought up to the surface because it's true, it's what I think she really would've done if that had really happened. Also how she wanted the raven back, but realized it couldn't happen again. That was so sad that she accepted the finality of the one-time-deal was just so heartbreaking.
This whole paragraph about Natasha having to remember Clint because she was the only one who could is my favorite of the fic (even reading the rest of it, I keep coming back to this one). I love the emotions in it and again just how Natasha needs him around because he made her feel things that no one could and how he saved her in a way. She needs him around but can't forget about him to save herself the pain cause then he'd be gone and no one, not even SHIELD would care anymore. He would simply cease to exist and that's why she holds on to his memory so much...UGHHHHHHH THE FEELINGS. This fic is brilliant about bringing out so much tangibility to the emotions created in it...it's just amazing.
And I love how Natasha greets him. EL OH EL XD Rightedly deserved in a way, but still LOL
The ending was....too sudden. I need more of this fic. ANOTHER!!!!!!! :D :D :D
I really did enjoy this and I'm sorry for the extremely long comment but I felt like you had definitely earned one for all of your hard work. Thank you so much for writing this because I really did love it. I have already added it to my memories and I love all the time, effort, and dedication you put into writing it. It's exactly what I wanted and I couldn't have asked for more. Thank you a hundred thousand times over!!! :D *HUGS* And thank you for the holiday wishes, I hope you had a great holiday season as well and I hope the new year treats you wonderfully :D
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