http://shenshen77.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] shenshen77.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised on February 28th, 2013 at 09:02 am
I really like it and I would love to see this continued. There is so much potential for dark and gritty and yet you set Clint and Nat up for a lot of snark and banter.

I loved the foot conversation, it shows how well they understand each other. If you want to set Clint up for withdrawing into himself, shooting arrows at the imagined head of the cult leader, I'd say you'd probably better go for darker. He's no stranger to child abuse, so I think it wouldn't take much to set him off. But to have this reaction to it... So there you have it, my two cents ;)
 
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