28 November 2012 @ 02:19 pm
Unfinished Fic Wednesday  
submissions of 500 - 1000 words of fic are welcomed at the bc.unfinished.gmail.com account (sorry, i got that wrong last week, eep. this is the correct address.) FEED ME, SEYMOUR.

today's submission hails once again from [livejournal.com profile] cybermathwitch who said:
A/N: There was a prompt-a-thon prompt for a Hunger Games AU (by [livejournal.com profile] nessataleweaver) here.


This is the beginning. (And can you tell the prompt-a-thon was good for my muses? And that they like to write AUs apparently.)


*****

The train sped ever forward towards the Capital, scenery blurring together in the windows. No one in the dining car was paying much attention to the windows, anyway.


It was a minor miracle there was anyone in there, at all. The influenza that had ravaged District three had wiped out all but a handful of the illicit "Careers" at the training center. (It had wiped out nearly a third of their total population in truth, but had hit the heart of the city where the careers lived and practiced particularly hard.)


The boy was only fifteen and hadn't expected to have his chance for at least two more years. The girl though. She might not - probably wouldn't have - been picked at all. She was slight, tiny even, and had curled herself up into a ball, knees to chest, as soon as they'd boarded. He'd been watching her, like he watched all the trainees, and hadn't seen her eat anything at dinner. The only way she would even have been at the training center was if she'd been orphaned or abandoned.


His paperwork on her said she was turning eighteen in two days. If she'd been born a week earlier, if the Reaping had been a week later, (or if the plague had held off another three months) she'd have been out of this year's running and out of the Reaping altogether. Fate probably didn't like her very much. It didn't say good things about her chances in there.


Absently he flexed his right hand and forearm, working some of the stiffness out from the scar tissue. He'd survived the Arena, but he knew better than anyone that no one came out unscathed.


******


The boy, Rikter, was a disaster area. Clint wasn't sure if it was nerves, or if he was just that bad at this game, but he was clumsy as hell and wouldn't look anyone in the eye. Clint wasn't even sure he'd last through the Bloodbath.


Natasha on the other hand, showed promise. He'd written her off at first, and she'd meant for him to. Then he'd caught the calculating look she gave the boy and realized she was playing them.


He waited until dinner was over and Audra had taken the boy off to talk. She'd seemed to have developed a soft spot for him somewhere along the way - or maybe the girl had just irritated her somehow.


That suited him fine. It was his second Games as a mentor, and last year he'd really only observed. But their oldest member was "retiring" and he'd been tapped to take his place at grooming tributes. He was only a few years older than they were, but he felt like it was decades. The Arena tended to have that effect on you.



He found her still curled into her customary seat (if one day could lead to anything being 'customary', which he doubted) and sat down across from her, forearms braced on his thighs so she could get a good look at his scars.



"You're not as helpless as you look."



Green eyes studied him. It was the look in her eyes that had tipped him off. They were calculating, direct - determined might be a good description. She wouldn't back down from a fight.



"I get wanting to keep what you can do close to your chest for everyone else, and not wanting to give away an advantage. But I'm not everyone else. I've been there before and I've got information you can use. I'm also not your enemy. I want you to win and I'm going to be doing everything I can on the outside to get you what you need. But you need to be straight with me if I'm gonna figure out what that is."


"Why should I trust you?" It was the first thing he'd heard her say since they met at the Reaping. It was also a very good question.


"Because I'm all you've got."



*****


They'd been fed well at the training center, but there was still more food spread out in the dining car than she'd ever seen in her life. That was why she'd been sent to the training center, after all - her family hadn't been able to afford to feed another child and they'd tossed her aside as soon as she was old enough the District would take her.


In the center they were given the best of everything, so long as they earned it. And you earned it by fighting, by being faster, stronger, fiercer, better than everyone else.


She'd done alright. She'd always made sure she was doing enough to survive, but never enough to be the first choice to "volunteer" when the Reaping came. That hadn't even been difficult, because plenty of the other candidates were eager to be the chosen one.


The plague had come swiftly and silently with fever and chills that made you shake so hard your bones rattled against one another. They had all watched one another succumb, until every bed was full and no one was even on their feet to care for the others. Her age group of fifteen girls had dwindled down to ten, then five, the two. Adelaide was still alive, but in no shape to stand up and volunteer, let alone walk into the Arena.


So she had boarded the train.
 
 
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[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_samalander/ on November 29th, 2012 01:59 am (UTC)
You can't stop there. Because Tony has to be a gamemaker and you have to show bamfness, all the bamfness.
[identity profile] heartequals.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 02:08 am (UTC)
OH MY GOD GAMEMAKER TONY YES PLEASE
[identity profile] ittykat.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 08:26 am (UTC)
Does that make Steve the Claudius Templesmith of this universe?
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 03:02 am (UTC)
Hmm... I think I could see Steve as more of a Victor, maybe?

I almost want to make Bruce an avox... (I'm evil and heartless, I know.)
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
::blink blink blink::

I honest-to-god hadn't given any thought to writing the rest of them into this story.

Hunh.

That'll take some thinking about, then.

:D
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_samalander/ on December 6th, 2012 02:57 am (UTC)
But Fury is totally their chaperone, and Tony is a Gamemaker and Steve is a career and Bruce is from district 3 and and and

MOAR
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 03:03 am (UTC)
:D heehee. All duly noted!

(But who will I get for her stylist? Inquiring minds...)
[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_samalander/ on December 6th, 2012 03:04 am (UTC)
COULSON
[identity profile] sugar-fey.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 03:08 am (UTC)
YES. Coulson would be the perfect stylist.
[identity profile] heartequals.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 02:09 am (UTC)
MORE! MORE! MORE!

Seriously, I am such a sucker for Hunger Games AUs, so...more!!!
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
Heehee. I live to serve!

:D Thanks!
[identity profile] angela-n-hunt.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 03:07 am (UTC)
I did not like the Hunger Games *and I love this.* Please continue. And thirded on Tony being a gamemaker.
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
Thank you! :D
[identity profile] jacedesbff.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 03:31 am (UTC)
Very good stuff! I like that he's a mentor and she's the tribute - great set-up. Please finish! I want to see what happens next!!!
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:56 am (UTC)
Thanks! :D
[identity profile] crazy4orcas.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 03:53 am (UTC)
I love your set-up with this. I'm curious to see how you incorporate the rest of the gang into this.

And I can almost picture the hurt/comfort when she becomes victor.
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:56 am (UTC)
:)

As above, I totally hadn't thought about doing that (adding in the others) so this will be more complicated apparently than I'd originally thought! :) But I'm sure I'll figure something out for them. I hope. ;)
[identity profile] sugar-fey.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 04:16 am (UTC)
OMG YES. More, please! I love the dynamic of him being a mentor and her a tribute.
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:55 am (UTC)
:D Thanks!

You know, in any other story/fandom/whatever? I've *never* liked that kind of an age gap (though admittedly, I didn't write as big of one here) -- but for Clint and Natasha it absolutely works for me.
[identity profile] sugar-fey.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 03:06 am (UTC)
Yeah, I know what you mean. I admit age gaps between adults is a bit of a kink for me, but it very much depends on the characters involved and their dynamic. With Clint and Natasha it just works.
[identity profile] sgteam14283.livejournal.com on November 29th, 2012 05:39 am (UTC)
really good start to the story! I like how you introduced Clint and Natasha (my first thought was that they were both Tribute's but I like the mentor/tribute relationship you've established). Also how they were brought together was different, which is good!

Any plans for later in the story, when Natasha has to go into the Games? Will she be killed and Clint left to brood or will she win and they can comfort each other? Minds want to know!

And I fourth Tony be the game maker! He's already got the facial hair for it ;D

Edited 2012-11-29 05:41 am (UTC)
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 02:54 am (UTC)
I just could *not* put them both into the arena together. Couldn't. (That had been my initial thought and then, just no.)

Of course now, this means he has to watch, while she has to fight, and that's going to be all the angst-cookies, too...

In re: what happens... I don't do character death. I just don't. Well, 98% of the time I don't, in any case. Now, as to how she gets out... I have no idea yet.
[identity profile] nessataleweaver.livejournal.com on November 30th, 2012 05:20 pm (UTC)
PLEASE MORE! Stuff like this really makes me think I should get around to actually reading the books.

Love the idea of Clint as trainer (and previous winner) to Natasha's Tribute. I also really hope you continue this to show what they become together after the Games (because it's Natasha. She's gotta win), because given the media attention to the Games, that should give a whole new level of danger to their chemistry. Come to think of it, the ever-present cameras are around even before then, aren't they?

Hmm, are you susceptible to bribery? Remember that thing I asked you to beta for me? (that I can't actually name here,because I wrote it for a ficathon that hasn't passed the authour reveal date yet) You said you loved that verse (and thank you for that). You post another part to this - at least this length or more - and I'll finish and send you either the first Pepper/Tony or Coulson POV piece in the same 'verse.
[identity profile] cybermathwitch.livejournal.com on December 6th, 2012 03:01 am (UTC)
I've read the first two books, and really enjoyed them, despite not liking dystopic fiction as a rule.

The cameras are fairly omnipresent, though you get the idea (at least I did) that they're not as present in the living quarters prior to the games. I don't know that Natasha will do anything that will buck the authority/system, either - so she might not be in as dangerous a position as Katniss finds herself. But it will be interesting to see how they handle the aftermath.

I do love that 'verse! And I bet I can even do that for you! (You certainly drive a hard bargain!) Though it might not be until after Christmas, since I have Yuletide coming up and all the posting for the secret santa here.

(I would seriously heart either of those options... and would also love more info on how the two of them (C/N) are linked and use their skills together. Totally obsessed with that idea, I tell you!)