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17 December 2012 @ 02:47 pm
Fic: Space Between  
Space Between
Rating: Mature
Summary: Two people begin with space that separates them, but sometimes that space dwindles to nothing.
Notes: Written for the [community profile] cottoncandy_bingo prompt "space". Click the title to read at AO3! Feedback is appreciated!
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Current Mood: relaxed
Current Music: Fous de la Mer - Esse Sonho
 
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[identity profile] alphaflyer.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 12:18 am (UTC)
Loved it. Beautiful, intimate, and real.
[identity profile] eiluned.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 04:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much!
[identity profile] crazy4orcas.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 02:52 am (UTC)
This was just beautiful!

And I adore this line:

She had never told him that she loved him, but he knew it anyway. Words weren't as important as actions for them, as touches and looks and the press of her lips to his.
[identity profile] eiluned.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 04:48 pm (UTC)
Thank you!
[identity profile] shenshen77.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 08:09 am (UTC)
Gorgeous, can't say anything else... it was so genuine and intimate and all things wonderful... lovely!
[identity profile] eiluned.livejournal.com on December 18th, 2012 04:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you so much!