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25 December 2012 @ 11:04 pm
Fic: The Red Rug  
The Red Rug
Rating: Explicit
Summary: Natasha wasn't sure why she picked out a red rug, but it fit well into her life.
Notes: For [community profile] cottoncandy_bingo prompt: "red carpet." Happy holidays! I am desperately trying to finish this bingo before New Years omg. I hope you enjoy this, and feedback will be given a loving home.
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[identity profile] crazy4orcas.livejournal.com on December 27th, 2012 01:33 am (UTC)
Just the right mix of fluff and angst.

This part really struck me:

If she were to stand up and step back, she wouldnJust the right mix of fluff and angst.

This part really struck me:

If she were to stand up and step back, she wouldn’t even be able to see the blood on the red lotus. It was just another drop against a sea of red, like a single drop of blood on her heart.

And I love the how you described the rug.
[identity profile] eiluned.livejournal.com on December 30th, 2012 11:24 pm (UTC)
Thank you!