http://alphaflyer.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] alphaflyer.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] be_compromised on January 31st, 2013 at 02:40 am
Love the idea of finding Clint in the circus where he got his start. So -- yeah. Would love to see how all this fits into the narrative, and what role Barney is playing in all of this (not to mention the as-yet-unseen Clint). So yes -- please, more???

One substantive comment: I'm not sure about the "Georgian conglomerate". That country is a mess of epic proportions, and as such pretty much free of "conglomerates". There is organized crime galore, but that tends to be centred in the separatist republics, which declared their "independence" a few years back (nobody listened) and would not consider themselves as Georgian, but rather as Abkhazian or Ossetian (with an unsubtle and unsavoury overlay of Russian mafia). So if your conglomerate is evil, you may want to consider nuancing its national origin ... ;-)
 
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