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be_compromised on August 2nd, 2012 at 07:40 am
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Re: Fic: A Matching Set, Rating: PG-13 for language and violence
Oooh, this is cool! Really evocative imagery. But the rhythm of your writing here is also really lovely. I really like all of it, but this: Her clothes were black and the street was black and he couldn't see the blood for the shadows. is such a musical sentence. V cool!