Don't have an AO3 account, so I kudosed there and commented here.

That was a fun fic. I loved the progression of their partnership (there is a typo where you sad "kidd" instead of "kiss" though). I also like how they sleep for days after the Chitauri attack (because, you know, mortal).

This is an excellent bar :). Nice tease on the link (you know us so well).

Edited 2012-09-22 11:54 am (UTC)

Wow, I really appreciate you taking the time to comment over here. Thanks! <3

Ooh, thanks, I'll fix that.

It seemed to me like they might be really tired, lol. Clinging to flying space scooters and jumping off buildings and all.

Thanks so much for the comment and the feedback.

I thought this was excellent. I loved this take on their first meeting and the focus on Clint throughout. I love that he can't help but save people. :) I thought the charaterizations were well done too-- Clint was bantery and playful without seeming weak/needy, Natasha was more reserved but not to the point of being withholding/emotionally shut down. There was a good partnership/friendship vibe in all this, very balanced, which is how I like my assassins. And also some genuine LOL funny banter moments. I love dialogue; it's probably my very favorite thing and you did a great job with that.

All in all, I loved it. Thank you for sharing! :D

Squail! Thank you. Oh, that's so nice to hear - I try really hard to keep characters in character, so it's nice when other people think I've succeeded. :) Natasha is really hard to figure out.

I looooove dialogue, too. Love it like burning!

Thank you for the comments, they're appreciated! <3

You are so welcome! I hope you'll keep writing this pair. :)